We have been learning to make are writing more interesting.To do this we re-crafting are writing by using a describe map a describe map help us plan are Ides in better ways are topic was Autumn writing.Each time we wrought a paragraph we added adjectives and smileys.The yellow words that are highlighted in yellow are adjectives and The words highlighted in pink are smileys and green is my favorite sentence.So we can see are writing get better.My favorite thing about writing like this is I like to make my writing better and better.
1.Autumn is a cool season. In Autumn it starts to get colder because winter is coming.You start to put the fire on because the sun is not shinning .The night gets longer because the sun goes to sleep earlier. The leaves change couler because there is know sun to shine.The leaves start to fall because they are dieing .dieing. You start to have a leaf fight because the leaves are all over the ground.
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2. Autumn is a beautiful season. In Autumn it starts to get icey cold because the snowy winter is coming.You start to put the fire to keep toasty because the sun is know longer there to keep us warm. The nights go longer because daylight saving are near.
The leaves change to a magical color because the bright warm sun is not there.
The magical leaves start to fall because they are fading away.
In Autumn it's a great Idea to have a leaf fight because wonderful colorful leaves are everywhere.
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3. Autumn is a wonderful season.In Autumn it start to feel like your in an Ice block because The sowy winter is coming.You put the fire on to keep toasty warm like a oven the warm sun is not there to shine. The nights get longer because daylight saving is just about hear.The leaves change to a magical colorful color because the bright shiny yellow sun is not shining.The beautiful wonderful leaves start to fall because they are slowly fading away. In Autumn it is the best idea to have a leaf fight because the wonderful color leaves are everywhere.
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4. Autumn is a amazing beautiful season. In Autumn it start to feel like you are in a fridge because the snowy winter is just around the corner .You put the fire on to keep lukewarm like you're in the sun. The nights get longer because daylight saving is coming.The leaves change different color like a rainbow because the bright shiny yellow sun is not shining.The beautiful wonderful leaves start to fall because they are slowly fading away in the snowy winter. In Autumn it is a wonderful idea to have a leaf fight because the rainbow color leaves are everywhere.
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5. Autumn is a amazing beautiful season. In Autumn it start to feel as cold as a snowy tondo is just around the corner .You put the fire on to keep lukewarm like you're in the sun. The nights get longer and darker earlier because icey snowy winter is coming.The leaves change different color like a rainbow because the bright shiny yellow sun is not shining.The beautiful wonderful leaves start to fall because they are slowly fading away in the snowy winter. In Autumn it is a wonderful idea to have a leaf fight because the crunching crispy leaves are everywhere.
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